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Ongoing, First published May 20, 2016
" She walked onto the soft, glittering, golden sands of the beach. Salt water evaporated in the pleasant warmth that swirled in the air. A crisp taste of salt from the endless horizon of the azure sea. A gentle orb of light lay gracefully on the waters edge. She sat down near the gentle waves that drew into the bay and retreated. Closing her eyes, the sun's light still kissed her eyelids. Feet wriggling into the pits of wet sand and they were smoothened with a wave of frothy water. Calm peaks formed and the waves folded into each other performing a waltz with the setting sun. She moved her hands to lay each shoulder, hugging her body as her legs crossed. She watched the chromes blend into the canvas in front of her, the crepuscular light sent a drift of relaxation into her tense muscles. Unwinding, the days end shortly escorted her mind to her last dark encounter with this beach. "Forgive and forget. Try not to regret." She mumbled to the whispering sea"

Beverly continues her journey to find herself, in order to obtain the path to her goal. Sequel to OBSERVER.
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„The sunset is beautiful, isn't it?", she asked, the sound of her voice strained, as if she hadn't been talking for a long time. The boy sat next to her, staring forward into the leaving sun. He didn't even look at the young woman when she spoke. Yet still he could feel himself, only a small part of himself, longing to hear more of her voice. It used to calm him down, singing soft lullabies whenever nightmares haunted him, or telling stories to him and his brother. It was the only comfort he could rely on. And he ended it before it could poison him. Silence filled the vast empty space. Only a single Rowan tree swayed in the non existent wind, its branches reaching down where the two figures sat, sheltering them from any harm that may come their way. It was time to leave this place again. He couldn't stay here for long. He hugged his knees tight, unconsciously swaying back and forth as he did so. Maybe, if he hugged himself hard enough, he could stay here and listen to one of her stories again? Just one short story. His efforts were in vain. He realized that when his hands and feet started to disappear, just like they have done thousands of times before. There was no way things could continue the way they were now. He knew he had to stop, but a selfish part of him was still holding onto that hope that everything would be okay once he opened his eyes. „Auntie,", he said, preparing his next words. „I... really prefer sunrises." 0101011101101111011100100110110001100100011100000110110001100101011000010111001101100101011100110110000101110110011001010110110101100101