The Escape, a Short Story

The Escape, a Short Story

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Jul 31, 2013
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Action and Thriller
She had wanted freedom, and so did he. Freedom was difficult to attain, almost impossible. Pain, risk, danger and death. It would all reach them, sooner or later. Raine and Zinc are my OCs and I haven't really plan out a great big story out for them. It's just here and there short action scenes so you can enjoy them in five minutes. The short stories are for my practice but you are absolutely welcome to read and review. I die of love when you guys review or comment so please drop a note if you read it OK? Haha, thank you so much!!
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"Alright, it's 12 noon. Deal or not?" I couldn't look at him, so I stared at the beauty in front of me. Somehow I knew he was watching it too. I felt like we were characters of a famous story, standing side by side, gazing ahead. I hesitated, my heart was beating fast, I was almost afraid that he's going to hear it too. But for the first time in my life, I trusted my heart and told my brain to go to hell. The girl lead in this story was going to do what she wanted, and won't fear the consequences. "Let's do this." I said and turned towards him. We remained silent for a couple of moments, absorbing the meaning of the deal we just agreed to. And then I saw his lips turned upwards just enough for me to notice. He turned to me and held my hand. I felt several emotions just by touching him. Nervousness, excitement, fear, happiness all at once. I pushed them all aside, and smiled ear to ear. He held his hand up, counting down to three, my heart racing with every finger he raised. And just as he finished, we jumped off the cliff.

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