That Girl.
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Last published Sun, May 22, 2016
Just a simple short story. It is also my first so I would most definitely appreciate critiques of any and all sorts (just as long as they're not mean or offensive).
I am aware of how the ending is seemingly abrupt. I ended it that way so that the reader can take it in any way they want, either in a positive way, or a negative way. It's entirely the readers prerogative.
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