NAKAW-TINGIN
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Last published Tue, Nov 1, 2016
Naniniwala ka ba sa second chances?
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Annia_Cessa's Note:
Some parts of this story are taken from true-to-life experiences of your humble author (Bangserie), lalo na yung part ng HERS, halos sakto na nga eh, pero iniba shempre yung other details. Assumera lang po yung part ng HIS hahaha. Asa naman akong ganun nga yung takbo ng utak ni Arki crush. Hahaha sulklaugh XD
Anyways, enjoy reading. We (Bangserie and CeeCee) really have our fingers crossed na sana you'll like this story. Masyado lang po kasi talaga akong nadismaya dahil naunsyami ang story namin ni crush. May feeling talaga ako nun eh. May spark dapat na mag-i-ignite eh. Kaso sinabutahe ako ni universe Kaya here, ginawan ko ng sequel ang crushlife ko. Hahaha
And enedit ko po ang previous chapters ng minor minor lang. Pinaltan ko yung ibang names and may binagong ilang ganaps. Pero very minimal lang naman ang changes. And baka nga walang nakapansin kasi halos walang reads, huhuhu. Anyways, sana po may magbasa. I'll be very happy kapag nagka-3 digits manlang ang reads nito. Hahaha..
REMINDER:
This story is no perfect, not even close to it. Aminado po akong maraming errors (Grammatical errors, typographical errors, etc.) Nagsusulat lang po ako to express and not to impress, so please be gentle sa mga critiques. I'm open to sugestions naman po, just be nice. I'd be very thankful if ever.
Well, Shala!~ （＾ω＾）
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