The Mafia's Daughter

An original story. An orphaned girl from south Korea is raised by her grandfather in new York. Upon his death she returns to Seoul to take care of the 'family business' she wasn't overly clear with her 2 bestfriends what that 'business' was.
Ive been working on this story on and off for like a year now. It started as a writing assignment about abuse for school and snowballed into an actual storyline. Lemme know whatcha think!