The Angel Experiment: Book One

( This is a rewrite of the first book of Maximum Ride. It is a great book series that needs some help in the later additions and that's what I am here for. I love these books and I want them to be amazing for everyone.)

Fourteen-year-old Maximum Ride knows what it's like to soar above the world. She and all of the members of her Flock - Fang, Iggy, Nuge, Gasman, and Angle- are just like ordinary kids.

Except...they have wings and can fly.

After escaping The School - which was in Death Valley- they remain inside their Nest - the house Jeb Batchelder brought them to when he broke them out.

When Angel is captured by the Erasers and taken back to The School, Max and Fang go after her while Iggy, Nuge, and Gazzy are left to deal with whatever problems occur while they're waiting for Max and Fang to return with Angel.

But are Max and her Flock the only ones of their kind, or is there a new, better version of them out there?

Join the Flock on the adventure of a lifetime!

( I DO NOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS. THE ONLY THING I OWN IS THE PLOT POINTS AND THE OC'S I PUT IT IN!!!)