The Hybrid Queen of Dawn

Hi everyone ...... this is one of my first stories ever publish, I'm not an expert at writing stories so I ask for understanding and opinions of what I should improve. This story is a Fan Fiction of Twilight actually to be specific Breaking Dawn and what happens next, I have never written fan fiction before but I decided what the heck lets give it a try, but I, like most of the fans out there will love to know what happens after breaking dawn, so I took the liberty to write a little continue of what could had happen given my active wild imagination, I took a piece of the breaking dawn to start my fan fiction, yes a changed it so my story could fit with the other books Stephanie wrote. My story is just for fun and entertainment only, there are not to be publish, and thus not affect the original stories. This is one of my dreams into words using twilight's character's
~Hope you like it and enjoy a little piece of my imagination~