The Surprise
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Complete Sat, May 28, 2016<5 mins
After another akuma attack in the streets of Paris, the mighty heroes Ladybug and Chat Noir saved the day, again.
Ladybug transformed to Marinette and went home, Chat Noir did the same thing.
It was a beautiful twilight in the big city. Marinette was staring at the dark blue sky with shining stars. At that moment she thought about her future. Will Adrien fall for her? Will they get married? Will they have kids? It was all in her thoughts. Then she went inside.
Adrien, however, he was in a photoshoot. After that, he felt very bored. He decided to go for a walk. Luckily Nathalie allowed it. He was in the park, thinking about all kinds of stuff. He was willing to know who the girl behind the ladybug mask is. He then decided to go at Marinette's, he hasn't been in a while. He quickly transformed into Chat Noir...
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