Noises in the Barn

Noises in the Barn

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Mystery
Ivy, Angela and Vincent are exploring one day and stumble upon an old abandoned barn. At first they think it's uninhabited, but soon realize somebody has been there. Secrets unfold as an orphan is found to be living in the barn and is the victim of many attempts on his life. Will they be able to find out what the orphan's mother gave to him right before she died? Or will desperate men get to him first? The first few chapter of this book are kind of corny (thanks Anna!) but I wrote them when I was quite young. This is a work in progress, and the first draft, so there may be some plot holes and the like around. If you like, you can comment on them when you see them. I will endeavor to plug them all up when I am finished! :D
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Meet Angela Santiago, the daughter of the most feared mafia boss in Spain and the sister of three overprotective older brothers. She's a loving and naive girl who has been hidden from the world since the night she turn ten years old. But what happends when Angela is kidnapped on the one night she decided to sneak out. Her kidnapper is none other than the most dangerous and feared Italian mafia Don, Elijah Black. Angela is introduced to the cruel world and has to overcome many troubles, that life throws at her. What will she do when she's only surrounded by lies, heartbreak, death and broken promises? Does she trust Elijah? or does she face this alone and push him away. ________________ "You can't leave me Angel, I have no one" he says softly. "Don't you remember?" she whispers. "Remember what?" he asks, looking at her through teary eyes. "I've always been yours" she whispers with a small smile. "You promise?" "Pinky promise, gummy bear." ________________ [Book 1] *not edited*

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