Weighting Rewrite

Weighting Rewrite

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Parts 8

Ongoing2h 42m

Last published Sat, May 28, 2016

I rewrote Weighting for NaNoWriMo a while back. I figured I have a couple friends that want to read it so I am posting it here. Enjoy!!! *NOT FINISHED YET*

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