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King Gualtiero and Queen Eillis had a beautiful daughter that they had kept the birth of secret, for they had wanted the people to think their child was born on the day of tricks since the holiday had been close. They told no one of the birth of the child except their closest friend King Leal of the southern Kingdom since Leal was to be the godfather and wanted to be there when the baby was born. Two days after the baby was born a murder was committed. Everyone mourned the loss of a great King and Queen without the knowledge of the child ever being born. At the same time, everyone cowered as the kings wicked younger brother, Cain, took the throne. Will the people of the kingdom ever know their stories of the unborn child being alive are true, or will the people's hope fade as time passes with no child? Will the mystery of the king and queen's death ever be solved or will the murder live free? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello peeps This is my first story so deal with me, and I would love to hear your opinion about the story as it gets posted. If you want to rewrite my story in any way, just ask, and I will make sure the story idea isn't to close to mine, but other than that I really don't care. As this is my first story and is mostly my testing story.
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