Controlling Toby
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  • Reads 981
  • Votes 25
  • Parts 5
  • Time 57m
Ongoing, First published Aug 05, 2013
Mature
Adeline never really believed in making wishes on New Year's Eve as you count the last seconds of the previous year away. Wishes aren't granted for regular people. In a drunken haze in a bar she wished for something silly just to get her cousins off of her back. The next morning she wakes up wishing she had rephrased her wish.


Edit: This was written a long time ago. I told my friend about this fan fiction over drinks a couple weeks ago. I've had, surprisingly, a lot of fun taking my ideas I had as a teenager and rewriting them. If you are reading Tobuscus fan fiction in 2024, I promise I won't judge you. This one is cool, even if it's about Tobuscus. You'll get a kick out of it.
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"You're a freak" they all say. "You're a criminal" they all think. "You're psycho" they told her. "I believe you" he says "I'm like you" he told her. "You're gifted!" she says. Well, if I'm really gifted, I didn't wish this gift...