Our Own Fallen Angels
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Last published Tue, Jun 7, 2016
NOTE: Due to my new experience and knowledge of writing and how it's done, I'm COMPLETELY overhauling my previous story: Divided. I liked the idea of it, but a lot of it was very "meh" in my opinion, and now, on my new account, I'm rewriting it. I'll be editing things such as writing style and what not. There may be new events and people incorporated into the story, and there will be some changes in things like last names. It also now has a new name; I'm opting with "Our Own Fallen Angels" instead of "Divided", as it has better flair and brings out the point of the story more. Anyway, this will be updated as frequently as possible, though I'm trying to make this novel quality, so it may take a while. Ladies and Gentlemen, I bring you the new and improved "Divided":
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Deja Stanfield is the opposite of a well-adjusted teen. No, she doesn't turn to drugs or alcohol or anything like that. No, she turns to people. And there's one person she has a close eye on.
Christian Wright is your average uninterested teenage boy who cares about video games more than anything else.
Deja thinks Christian is her answer. Christian barely thinks about Deja's existence. Both of their worlds get turned upside down, and even connect even closer, when an unexpected transfer student, Anastasia Marie, arrives to their Rosewood sanctuary.
And she could turn their lives around more than anything.
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