And I Looked Into Her Eyes...
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Last published Wed, Jun 8, 2016
Hi ya'll! I'm new here to Wattpad, and this is one of the very first fanfics I've ever written, so critique if necessary!
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I looked at the new girl in the back of the class, her posture perfect and her notes so neat. She had a determined look plastered on her face every day she walked into class, and she had this aura that seemed like she was better than everyone, that she had her life figured out and was planning to do great things. She looked like she was happy.
But then I looked into her eyes...
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