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So I'm trying to write a book (yeah, I know, aren't we all), and I really would just like some honest constructive criticism and feedback. Okay. So here's the description I know you're all dying to read:
Claire is a hopeless romantic who is hopelessly in love with her ex girlfriend. They're best friends who talk on the phone 24/7 and can't seem to get out of each other's heads. Here's the story of what happened to them. Did it end up in heartache or was it truly meant to be?
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