A Man of Few Words
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Ongoing10m
Last published Mon, Jun 6, 2016
This is a short story that I wrote, it's the first story I have every written so I decided to get some feedback on how it is. If you have any suggestions on how to improve the story or my writing skills, I'm all ears.
Ps- Although it says "part 1" that's the whole story, I may add a second part that's from a different perspective but that will be awhile.
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