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Trials
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Ongoing, First published Jun 06, 2016
A young boy is kicked out of his home for not being a man. He begins his quest, then immediately abandons it to fall I  love with a beautiful warrior. But both seem at unrest...


Warning, a little risqué. Also, there are some jokes at the expense of people with certain body types, just want to clarify these are purely comedic. You are all beautiful 

First draft, looking for constructive criticism:3

This is the first story I've ever written, I have no idea if it's any good. I'm transgender myself so I tried to write down my complex feelings and I hope you enjoy it^_^
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