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False Move [EDITING]
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BOOK 1 FROM THE KLIEN SERIES
Sarah Williams, an 18 year old girl, was devastated after realizing her mother had Coronary heart disease. She had friends around her that supported and offered money for the surgery, but after Sarah's mother advised her not to bother collecting the large amount of money as a loan, Sarah had only one chance to save her mother. She dropped out of school, and desperately searched for a job that offers a huge amount of money. She stumbled across an agent belonging to an secret organization that scans for humble people like her to join. The organisation offers her the job that promises her the full amount of money needed for the surgery, making Sarah wholeheartedly agree to the offer. As a secret agent, she is set the task of kidnapping an ordinary girl, whilst pretending to be a trustworthy friend to avoid suspicion. But somehow she manages to get herself into a puzzling situation, after hearing something she wasn't suppose to hear, where she has to decide whether to stick to her promise and earn the money or quit her job in order to prevent trouble from occurring in someone else's life.
Author's note:
~This is my first story on Wattpad, so there will obviously be some errors and mistakes. If there are any mistakes please do comment down below, so I can correct them :)
I also find that I sometimes write in a way that is really basic (e.g repeating words, only using dialogues, no description of the characters), so I am planning to edit it properly at some point.
I think of this as a draft, and the reason I published this is to get some feedback from the other writers out there. So I really appreciate any constructive feedback!
I hope to publish each chapter every week, so thats it. I have somehow made this into a story of it's own. Sorry~
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