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Hello everyone I have read a number of fan-fictions to know what works and what should just stay out of books for good.Some of you might want to know how good you think your books are or what you need to improve and I'm here to help you with that!
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A New Journey {Eeveelution FanFic}
-{Writers Note: This is my first book, also a Pokémon fanfiction of sorts. I hope you enjoy it and please leave me constructive criticism since i often run out of motivation due to feeling it isn't good enough.}- {Disclaimer: I do not own Pokémon, I'm simply making a fan-fiction.}
Spirals || Mattheo Riddle
"I was reaching for stars that didn't exist, caught up in the fantasies born of willful hope. I threw myself in the path of fate because I wanted to be swept away." ... We do stupid, stupid things in the name of those we love. We dedicate ourselves to false promises and we hope that in the end, it all turns out alright. I was never the kind of person who jumped into things without thinking about the consequences. I never dreamed of what could come from some silly mistakes. Two new students come for their 6th year at Hogwarts. Neither of them particularly want to be there. What havoc could a witch and a dark wizard bring to the year? As they both become frustratingly curious about each other, things fall in place that might never have occurred if they had just never met. ... So I started this book because I was bored, and now it's kind of my life accomplishment weirdly enough. It's not perfect and definitely not what it started out as but this fic has parts of my heart and soul in it and I'm proud of how far it's come. Contains toxic but also lovable Mattheo Riddle and an emotionally relatable mc. !!!Finished updating but still doing some editing!!! *WARNING* Contains violence, sexual content, swearing, mentions of abuse, death and possibly more. *I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters, Mattheo Riddle belongs to @yasmineamara, I only own my own characters. Happy readingComplete![story review shop [[ discontinued ]]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/153731757-256-k824772.jpg)
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Have you been searching for someone to give their honest opinion on your work? Are you browsing review books to find the next story you'll fall in love with? Me too, bro. The reviews are 100% free for those willing to have their stories criticized, and my reviews are 100% honest with a hint of sweetness to soften things up. Please, come on in and request. Give me something new to read. Give me something /good/ to read.Complete![[DISCONTINUED] 𝐈𝐌𝐏✤𝐒𝐓𝐄𝐑! | Dream x Reader x Nightmare](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/242963385-256-k622094.jpg)
[DISCONTINUED] 𝐈𝐌𝐏✤𝐒𝐓𝐄𝐑! | Dream x Reader x Nightmare
EDIT JULY 2024 Never read this like ever. It's so cringe and so vile, I'm below it. Please read my other works on AO3 under the same handle (purplepercie) because Imposter! literally sucks. Focus on something better with your time 😭 EDIT MARCH 2023 FOR INFO AS TO WHY THIS WAS DISCONTINUED, REFER TO THE LAST CHAPTER OF THIS FIC AND READ THE FIRST SEVEN PARAGRAPHS (this includes the little one sentence breaks)! You can read the others but it's since become sort of outdated info so I don't recommend. Shrug. OG DESCRIPTION: 𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐦𝐚𝐝𝐞 𝐛𝐲 𝐦𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐡𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 , 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐬𝐨 𝐦𝐮𝐜𝐡 ━━━ 𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐭𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐮𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐚𝐬 : 𝐲𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐬 𝐦𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐮𝐚𝐠𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐰𝐚𝐫 ━━━ 𝐝𝐨 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐮𝐞 𝐢𝐟 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐭𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐜𝐬 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐫𝐢𝐠𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 ! ━━━ 𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐠: 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐞: 𝐩𝐚𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐝: 𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐮𝐞𝐝: ✦ 𝐚𝐦𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐬 : 𝟐𝟐,𝟎𝟎𝟎+ ❥ 𝐏𝐔𝐁𝐋𝐈𝐒𝐇𝐄𝐃 𝐎𝐂𝐓. 𝟑𝐑𝐃 , 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟎 (𝘾𝘾 ) 𝘼𝙏𝙏𝙍𝙄𝘽. 𝙉𝙊𝙉𝘾𝙊𝙈𝙈. 𝙎𝙃𝘼𝙍𝙀𝘼𝙇𝙄𝙆𝙀Complete
𝒫𝓇ℴ𝓋ℯ 𝒴ℴ𝓊𝓇𝓈ℯ𝓁𝒻 || 𝚂𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚞𝚜 𝚂𝚗𝚊𝚙𝚎 𝚡 𝚁𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚎𝚛 || 𝔹𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝟙 ||
✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷ "I'm not sure how I can go on any longer Severus. I don't know how to just see you as a friend." "You have to Y/N. There's no other option. No matter how badly we want it." ✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷✷ A story of how Severus and Y/N became friends, coworkers, and possibly something more. **story starts off with younger Y/N and Severus, then leads to where the books start, and goes through the first 4 books of Harry Potter!** VERY SLOW BURN ⚠️TW - suicidal thoughts - self harm - abuse - sexual assault - mature content - smut (Please be kind!! This is my very first story I have written and I want to make sure that it's enjoyable and goes according to timeline❤️) ❗️I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE HARRY POTTER CHARACTERS - ONLY Y/N AND PARENTS❗️ (I do plan on writing another book about the remaining of the story to cover the entire Harry Potter series, starting off where this one will end at the end of Goblet of Fire) Enjoy my little dungeon bats!!!!🤍🦇 REVIEWS ☎️ "OMG, THIS BOOK IS SO GOOD❤️❤️❤️❤️" - @MaduTiet "Yes I enjoyed THIS WAS MY FAV BOOK EEVRRRRRRRR AND I WILL BE WAITING PATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT ONE AND IM SURE ITLL BE AWESOMEEEEE" - @canyonstarss 🏆RANKINGS 🥇#readerxsnape 🥇#alanrickman 🥇#potionmaster 🥇#snapexreader 🥇#proveyourself 🥉#hogwartsprofessor ☝🏼word count : 121,513☝🏼Complete![[✓ ] Irony. | Kamishiro Rui x GN!Reader.](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/364920729-256-k386257.jpg)
[✓ ] Irony. | Kamishiro Rui x GN!Reader.
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Oneshots written to cope with self-harm
I am currently updating this with some of my older works, but not actively writing. You can leave requests, but the chances of me actually writing them are very low due to freetime and motivation <3 tw: do not read if self harm, depression, anxiety and the like have any chances of triggering you stay safe yall <3 Request guidelines - no smut, no graphic SA, no ED, just do to my personal comfort levels writing said topics feel free to request from any fandom, ive watched and real a lot of shit so I might be in it lol included fandoms: sk8 the infinity bsd mha haikyuu mcu hxh voltron harry potter some random booksComplete
Legends Life - Out of control
This is a novel about a topic we technically made up randomly and if there are any mistakes, errors, or just places I could fix and add more details please tell me, I want to make this book enjoyable and exciting to read! Also please be aware that some of these will be notice's and this book does need and have a blood warning and a swear warning! Please do be aware if you can't deal with blood this book does get descriptive (Partly true) and I will be explaining what scars, burns and wounds look like and the pain felt for them. This book is more themed in the future than it is nowadays. You may also find some technology that is more futuristic, and there are things talking about the past. Most of the book is switching between views of the main characters. We want you to expect the unexpected in this book, for example: Most books don't kill off the main character, we want you to think we will kill off one of them. Most of the characters in this will have birthdays and age in the background and it may not be written. There will be more books coming out so we will end this one on a cliffhanger.Complete
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-{Writers Note: This is my first book, also a Pokémon fanfiction of sorts. I hope you enjoy it and please leave me constructive criticism since i often run out of motivation due to feeling it isn't good enough.}- {Disclaimer: I do not own Pokémon, I'm simply making a fan-fiction.}
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