This is the second draft of the Tale of the Night. I've fixed grammar issues, along with various problems in semantics, consistency, and other small things.
This is actually my first finished draft of this story, which means there are lots of mistakes still. Feel free to point out things you are confused about or spelling/grammar errors. Lots of the chapter titles are sloppy and a couple of the chapters need to be completely rewritten because they are so horrible. I hope you enjoy and leave your thoughts.