Internet Lover (Rewriting)

Now, we've all heard stories about the internet. How people will take extreme measures to get what they want. But when you're searching for a one time fun, you don't really care about all that... Until the day you actually meet your internet lover.

Lizz was having some harmless fun with a total stranger on a site. She thought she'd never see his face again.
What she doesn't know is that she will be seeing much more of him...in flesh and blood.

"...I felt someone coming closer to me as I started grinding on them. Few seconds later, i didn't feel their presence anymore...instead it was replaced. I could feel someone's body heat against me, making me feel uneasy. Firm hands grabbed mine as they trailed down my arms onto my hips, leaving goose bumps on my skin.
I heard a deep manly voice whisper into my ear..."

-Okay, this is my first book. So please, let me know what you think and what i can improve (: