A huge journey to a forbidden paradise all started with an ominous note, a couple of friends, and dream shared by all of them, or, a common incentive per-say. I really appreciate any and all feedback or criticism; I'm looking to improve and hope to make this story big, so help me make it better!
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my first story in a long time so please be nice
it could turn into a yandere but who knows (except for me) what could happen to you... hehehe
one of my friends helped me with some ideas so some of the credit goes to her and to him..