Averagely Invisible
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Last published Sun, Jul 10, 2016
Her death was quick and I guess that was a good thing because that means she didn't suffer. Everyone thought she was getting better, the doctors thought that her condition was improving, she looked better. The next thing we know we were getting a call from the hospital. They said that her condition was worsening. My twin sister was dead by the end of the day.
So I did what any grief ruled sister would do.
I got revenge.
Base plot and title created by @as_lost_as_alice
She wanted the story to continue and me, being the greatest friend that I am, took the story into my own hands. Hope you enjoy!
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