Edenmaker: God Tricker's Curse
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Last published Mon, Nov 21, 2016
Even after a thousand years, I don't know if we did the right thing. Who has the authority to say what the right thing is in the first place? I don't know if we were the followers of a great messiah, or pawns in the most glorious of games. I suppose it's a moot point though. The world that came of it is so beautiful, the cost rarely crosses my age-addled mind anymore. If this is the result, I am glad to have been a pawn. I am glad to have placed my trust in a maniac, a sociopath, and a criminal. A man that had the audacity to look at the world and say "We can do better."
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