Up The Down Escalator
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  • Reads 372
  • Votes 60
  • Parts 13
  • Time 31m
Ongoing, First published Jun 14, 2016
So now I'm trying to write an original story. I don't think that I will have much of a problem getting ideas (my life is strange enough).  Just PLEASE give some constructive criticism! Or even non-constructive criticism, for that matter. I just want to know that people care enough TO criticize.
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Elliot's partner was his whole world, but after Allan's death, his ghost haunts Elliot's dreams. Everyone tells Elliot to move on, but he isn't sure he can. ***** It's been a year since the love of Elliot's life, Allan, passed away. Everyone thinks he should have recovered after that much time, but Allan still haunts Elliot every night. He struggles to maintain relationships with his family, and despite a coworkers interest he can't summon up the courage to date. Elliot is living for the past, because to live for the present means he'll have to live with a hole in his heart. But the question Elliot has to face chases him through his monotonous days: is mourning Allan with everything he has truly living? [[word count: 40,000-50,000 words]]