Up The Down Escalator
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So now I'm trying to write an original story. I don't think that I will have much of a problem getting ideas (my life is strange enough). Just PLEASE give some constructive criticism! Or even non-constructive criticism, for that matter. I just want to know that people care enough TO criticize.
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