Romancing the Demon

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21-year-old Jae Bowmae moved from sunny California to Scotland, after her grandparents died. Young and afraid, but determined to make a new life for herself. She meets new people and soon her world is twisted upside down. Torn between what's right and wrong, good or evil. And most importantly love and family as she tries to discover what happened to her parents and what she really is.
I'm sorry for all grammatical errors I wrote this when I was 16 or 17 I am editing everything day by day because everything needs improvement. if you see anything that should be fixed please comment and let me know also if you like it.

Author note: This is my first story I've made, there will be many grammatical errors so bare with me I will fix the problems as fast as I can Please enjoy.