unveil my eyes

Hi this is my first time write a story on Wattpad, hope you like it?
Unveil my eyes is a story about a young girl name Alicia,who is growing up to become a teenager.Her eyes are now revealing the reasons why her parents didn't wanted her to do certain things, so as she is becoming older her mind is become more mature.
Do you think i should make this story or not?
feel free to give opinions and ideas i may include them if you like.