This story is one that one of my friends made for me. I think she is an fantastic writer and this is a good start for her. Even though this is only a short story that doesn't have very long chapters I hope you like it. Please do comment because she doesn't think she's that good at writing and doesn't want to show people her stories because she gets scared that people are going to judge her. But as I said I think she's really good and I hope you think so to. :)