Heatwave

This I wrote for my little brother who is a techno-freak but also is obsessed with dragons, so here is a futuristic world where dragons still exist. To stay true to the fantasy, however, the beasts are capable of human speech with their mouths unlike those in my favorite fantasy-dragon world from the Inheritance Series. Please enjoy and comment as much as you can, the only reason this is here is because my little brother next wants me to make him a sequel to this and I'm at a loss for ideas. Feel free to point out any little mistakes as my writing speed tends to make things a bit messy and it was too much to proof read all in one sitting. So please, as I said, enjoy exploring my growing fantasy world from the point of view of the little monster it was written for, and comment. I'm ready for any ideas, additions, and general pointers in the right direction!