Eternal Discipline | #Wattys2016
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Last published Wed, Jun 22, 2016
Disclaimer: I'm no Christian man, and I do not wish to offend religious individuals out there. This is a story that was requested/concepted by my dad, and I wish to write it. Please do not read if you are not interested in a atheism view of religion and God. For the rest of you, enjoy.
Beta'd by Aeltrya.
Summary: Byrant Caine, a sinner from Heaven (his home planet), is sentenced to 10,000 years on a different, new strange planet called "Earth." His mission? Find a bearded man named Jesus Christ, and convince him he is the god of this so called Earth. Wearing a black and white uniform with a cloak, Caine, a.k.a. "Lucifer," is going on a journey south to find this man, while being introduced to new things he's never seen before.
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