My Immortal Brought to Life
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Last published Sun, Jun 19, 2016
Disclaimer: All the characters here other than Ebony, Willow, and Britney belong to JK Rowling. (List will be expanded if I find a character I have looked over) These three characters as well as the general plot of the story belong to Tara Gilesbie.
I am sure that you have heard of the infamous My Immortal but have been too frightened to seek it out and read it. Or, maybe you did and have lost all faith in fanfic writers. Well I did the latter and have gotten INSPIRED.
Inspired to do what? you might ask. Inspired to redeem Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and give her actual character development, as well as all the other characters. I may be unfit to do this, I will admit that I have so far only read the first Harry Potter book, but I assure you that my writing may just save this atrocity, not only with proper, understandable writing, but also with a better plot and better-developed if not more-canon characters.
In my noble work I have removed all scenes involving "he put his thingy into my you-know what"s (actual quote from the original fic) as well as many other things that have made me facepalm so much I am probably strong enough to be One Slap Person.
But never fear I will not remove some of the entertaining variations between the original fic and actual canon such as: Severus Snape being split into two characters, Dumbledore trying to be more hip, and of course, student Hagrid, because why not.
Honestly if you have read the original fic you will see that in my attempt at "bringing to life" these characters, I am in a way satirizing the fic. Ironically. I say that cause I sincerely want to give better to Ebony and all the rest of the cast than what they were served originally.
tl;dr: A rewrite of My Immortal with all the nonsensical Bad Things removed and more plot and character development added.
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