Lee's Maximum Ride Reboot
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So, uh, I read Maximum Ride and... that was certainly something. It's pretty deeply flawed, but here's my two cents on how this edgefest could have been better-written.
Also, I understand Wattpad's not a great platform for my review/reboot stuff, but whatever, tumblr's probably tired of hearing it.
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