Aqua Combat - Yellow (Draft 1)

Aqua Combat - Yellow (Draft 1)

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This is the first in a series; Yellow. If you have any suggestions about the plot, characters or anything, please comment! Any constructive feedback is gratefully accepted, I would love to hear it! I am aiming to get this re-written within the next year, and then hopefully I will rewrite it again and continue until it is publishable! My aim to have this published in the next 3 years, so I have a nice wait... - TheYellowMan
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A new take on the first novel of the Anti-Hero story line, with updated and polished writing. Expanding and rewriting the story along with adding never before scenes and characterizations with most of the original story beats along the way. This is not the official canon novel, however I'd like to think of it as an alternative universe. You might recognize some things, and see new ones as well. This is also a test for the audience to see how my writing has improved over the years. See which one does best. This is a demo, and will only be up to eight chapters before the main plot of the story unfolds. So if this gets enough traction and if people like this version more, then I'll continue writing it and make this one the canon version instead. (This would also make it a rewrite for Secrets of Demise)

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