The Promise

The Promise

Miss_Immortal_Queen

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Ongoing12m

Last published Fri, Jun 9, 2017

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'His eyes were bold, full of curiosity, and most importantly, full of happiness. But a second later all of that changed. His golden brown eyes that were full of life was now lifeless, dull. If I were far away, I would've missed the single sound, his forever last words to me as his life drained slowly. "Remember me."'

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