Echo of a Girl
Salmoniousthedog
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  • Reads 690
  • Votes 28
  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 27m
Salmoniousthedog
Ongoing, First published Aug 14, 2013
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A young girl is born into a family that wants to pretend she does not exist.  Her father has a taste for hurting just her.  She cries out for someone to help her and gets a response she does not expect.It's a ghostly face in the mirror.  The Girl has no idea that her journey will include murder, a doppelganger and a run for her life.

Thank you for taking the time to read The Girl.  It can be a difficult read at times because child abuse is never a nice thing but throw in a doppelganger, a murderer and a tough as nails grandma and you've got a great story.  For those of you who read the story earlier, I have done a re-write suggested by other writers.  I hope it is a better read.
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36 parts Complete

Paisley is in love with Zeke and anyone who comes between them and doesn't back off, well they're never heard of again. When Paisley made her first kill, she found out how much she enjoyed it and how it easy it was to get away with it. So for her there is no reason to stop the killing and it's an easy solution for her problem. But now with her latest victim, Trudy, things start to go wrong when the police are suspecting Zeke. Paisley can not let this happen and with every next decision she makes everything starts spiraling more and more out of control. Enter Damien, a boy who believes he's just like Paisley and he wants her badly. But she loves Zeke and will do anything for him, although she is not so immune to Damien as she likes to believe. If that's not enough problems, she is also stalked by the ghosts of her past kills. They are hiding in the mirrors and waiting for their chance for revenge.

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