Estranged Aptitude
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Ongoing11m
Last published Sat, Jun 25, 2016
This is a piece I started that tells the story of boy who has infinite power. But with abilities like Blaise's comes a price; fear. Atomic Manipulation is not something to be messed around with. His life is superficial because no one truly trusts him. The Academy is in charge of him until Blaise turns 18 soon, and they'll do anything to keep him. Not to mention the group of people who brutally murder those with abilities is gaining power.
So I started this story for NANOWRIMO and never got to far with it. All I have so far is less than one chapter, but I think it's pretty long. I need feedback to know if this is something worth continuing. I think it has potential!
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