Amazing

So this is just a short story I wrote about 2 years ago for the yaharah rivers writing contest! It's nothing big or anything just thought I'd share it. The writing isn't to good though so be warned. I didn't obviously place in 1st I think it was 3rd or 2d or 4th, I'm not sure people won't tell me and I wasn't there on the day they announced the winners but, someone told me I made it to top 5 so that's good.