Poems

I've come to the liking of poetry, its way to express, vent and understand ones experience through an understandable art form that may range from the most depressing to the best uplifting. I'm new to this but I hope the means of my expression will be understood by you readers... I of course am a tad more direct as to what I'm expressing but I do hope a metaphor or two will erupt out of these. Please give me feedback as to where I'm lacking and where I'm on point. Improvement will come trough your advice