Deep Waters
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What if the tale of the Little Mermaid was not what you thought?
What if the "Little" Mermaid was not sweet and innocent?
18 year old Layla is the youngest in her family. Yes she has beautiful long dark hair and eyes that are as blue as the ocean, but she is not sweet and innocent, not like you may think.
Layla has always been jealous of her six sisters, always being able to go up to the surface when she couldn't and when the day finally came to go up to the surface, there is a man that she is fascinated by.
She decides to go what everyone in the sea calls the "sea witch". But what if she wasn't a sea witch at all? What if she was just a kind witch that offered people help when they needed it the most?
She offers Layla a deal that she cannot refuse, to be human, to make the man she saw to fall in love with her, but when she realises Layla's plans she realises that Layla didn't want to fall in love with the man. She wanted to make the prince fall for her using a potion and then when the time came, kill him.
So when she finally ruled the kingdom of the sea, she could be a mermaid once more, and rule as the Queen, the one and only Queen.
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