Autopilot

I am writing a short story about a young woman named Danilla Laine. She is someone who has just come out of a sort of mental 'coma' where she is living her life unaware of what is really going on. A reoccurring element in this text is the character "autopilot" which refers to her mental state. "Autopilot" is my idea of what goes on when you have a routine and you are so used to it that it becomes this automatic and natural thing and anything out of routine can seem odd. The story is from her point of view and is a conversation between her and her Councillor. I want people to feel a sort of unease and go into a state of self-awareness when they read my story.

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