Golden Tags And Silver Collars

The chatter of the woods are gone, all that is heard is your breath and the sound of the rain. The sky is black and you are alone, wandering, without a home.
A loud noise makes you turn, and you whip around only to be face to face with a MONSTER. He leans down with a sadistic smile and whispers a single word.

Run.
This is My first Fanfiction so please tell me what ya think! )
I'm going to be fixing this because it's god awful, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated