Abnormal #Wattys2016
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- Chapitres 11
En cours d'écriture1h 7m
Dernière publication sam., oct. 15, 2016
Key things to note:
-I'm only 13 years old, so i'm quite new at this; writing seriously. Obviously i'm not the best so please, if you can, give me some criticism on my story and how to improve my writing, grammar, punctuation etc. I actually need the criticism.
-There are a couple swear words in there but very little, and only used when necessary.
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