SOME SHORT STORIES

Just a collection of small articles I have been working on for a while. I wouldn't really call them short stories(?) They are really just small parts from bigger projects I've had, and I want some real feedback on them.

LIKE, I NEED ANYONE WHO READS THESE TO POINT OUT ANY MISTAKES (nothing grammatical. I already know I don't English right.)

Tips on how the story should be written? GREAT
Need some clearing up on certain things within an excerpt? GREAT
Want a continuation of an excerpt or a full story? EVEN BETTER
Want to just say hi? UM... SURE, I GUESS???

~~I only want feedback~~