Personality Break
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Complete Thu, Jun 30, 2016<5 mins
She buries herself in her stories and hears the voices of her worst characters. Things at home are getting worse and the voices are getting louder. This is the moment she breaks.
A rough short story. I'm looking for feedback on what I need to fix and how I can make it better before I edit it.
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