(I Don't Have A Title)
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I was told in school to write a "Creative writing story" for my weekly essay. My teacher gave me a list of first sentences, so I used one of them and made the best of it. It's a first draft. I would love if you guys could tell me if there is edits, and any feedback and constructive criticism. :)
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