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Ongoing, First published Jul 01, 2016
I'm swimming in my own tears.
Am I still breathing?
I'm pinching my self.
Feeling no pain.
I'm sitting up, hitting my head in the bead above.
The girl looks at me with eyes emptier than the ocean.
It's like she gave me a new version of the picture.
But perhaps I could be delete it?




A few years ago i thought poetry was cool so i decided that i would try to write something.
This is the outcome. I know this sucks, please don't judge I just uploaded this for fun.
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You Were Always a Daydreamer Draft Version

8 parts Complete Mature

When you're forced to mask Reality with Fantasy. The lifted layers finally unveil the tombstone of self. The biggest cities into the tiniest pebbles The massive ideas and thoughts formed into merely something to fear. A protagonist who already forgot his name Remembers He is a Daydreamer. Which is the only way to cope with life after multiple tragedies. And the fraud on fake friends faces. Only to daydream. As losing touch takes a toll on that rotting indulgence slowly. This get's quite horrific as it goes on. It's not to enjoy but to reflect on and experience. I decided to publish the draft version, because I don't think I can fully finish YWAADD final edition any time soon. I am in the worst mental and emotional state ever. It's quite a struggle and I suffer heavily. So yeah, the polished draft kind of holds up aswell too. The final one is way longer and eventful. So, um yeah I don't expect this to get attention at all, it's kind of really mid in some parts. But enjoy, or don't I guess. Yes this was inspired by Everywhere At The End Of Time. And other fan projects.