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  • Reads 1,446
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  • Parts 6
  • Time 58m
Ongoing, First published Jul 04, 2016
"Actually I don't know I didn't see who it was, it's just that when I was drowning I found a grip on my hands then I lost my conscious, and when I woke up I did felt someone's presence around me but I couldn't figure out who it was. I was not able to see any damn thing in this world. I only know that I had lost all hopes of coming back to all of you but then I did came back and when I stood up on my feet looking at the surrounding I just saw a faint shadow that disappeared behind those big rocks & that's when I assume that it belonged to my saviour!" I explained them everything and let out a heavy sigh. 

Isn't it obvious I would want to thank the person who saved

"Like in our innings if we are lucky enough we get a free hit i.e. a second chance. Same happened with you mate! You got a FREE HIT for your life. Live it to the extreme!"Ro said and then laughed at his own weird comparison.
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