Falling In The Deep (Phan)

Dan has been suffering from extreme depression, and he only had a mom, that was always working, to help him. His family was very poor and he barley could afford school. At school, a 10th grade kid named Phil comes into his life, and Phil is told to show him the ropes of the school and hopefully make some friends. Back at home, Dan finds out that his mom recently died in a car accident coming home from a night shift. Now Dan had no one to turn to. But Phil.

Soooo....

Hi! This is my book Falling in the Deep(obviously!)

So please tell me anything of what you think of this book; good or bad.

If something is in brackets and in bold letters it it something I would/did think/say while thinking/reading this book. (Wow so much slashes!)

Also, suggestions would really be appreciated.

If you make a cover for me, I will most likely use it, and tell me if you want credit or not, but know I will NEVER take credit for someone else's work.

PS I'm not homophobic in anyway, so if your lesbian, gay, or queer please don't be effended.

Well that's all for now so enjoy the book!