Bad Judgement
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Last published Sat, Jul 9, 2016
Naïve Ana makes the ultimate Bad Judgement call when she trusts the wrong person. She finds herself in an impossible situation, from which she can see no escape. Who will help her in her hour of need...?
**Warning-contains themes of abuse.**
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