Neil
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Neil Redtown had the perfect life. He had a beautiful wife, and three darling children, as well as a large house in South California. His family life couldn't get any better. In fact it could only get worse... and trust me, it did!
One night, everything falls a part. Neil loses everyone and everything, and it's all his fault. He can barely survive, but he knows he must. He wants to be forgiven... He needs to be forgiven. He has to be forgiven. It's like a noose round his neck, and all he can do is choke, trying not to suffocate, trying to forget the pain. Trying to live.
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